Fire breaks out in Ogden
Yesterday a fire broke out on Washington Blvd. Deputy Fire Cheif Greg Chamberlain said the fire started around 2:00 p.m. and officals arrived on the scene at 2:07 p.m.
The cause of the fire came from the resturaunt in the bottom part of the building. Pedro Sanchez owner of Pedros mexican resturant, was cooking hamburgers for a regular client Michael Freeman when the grease from the grill caught on fire. He reportedly ran out and told Michael to call for help. The fire quickly spread and it is unknown the cost of the damage or if the building can even be repaired.
There were no fatalities however Pedros brother Miguel Sanchez and his two daughters Maria del Mar who is four years old and Mercedes who is two, were in their apartment on the second floor of the building. Miguel was treated on the scene for smoke inhalation and both girls were taken to McKay-Dee hospital to be treated for the same condition.
Although this was a very tragic incident, Pedro is not giving up on his dream of owning and operating a resturant in this country. He has already had offers from several of his friends to help him rebuild.
2 comments:
All of the facts were presented here, which is important. However, punctuation and capitalization errors abound. Remember to use commas and apostrophes, and to capitalize proper nouns.
I think your story was well written, it was better than mine haha. I especially liked your last paragraph. It was clear that Pedro was determined to keep his restaurant, that part, along with the rest of the story was well written. Good job.
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